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Wednesday 24 September 2014

Narritive


This week we were writing a narrative. This narrative is about three friends, there is two friends who always fights. Keep checking back at my blog for more writing, please leave a comment.


Once there was three friends their names were Ashley,Taunese and Elizabeth. Elizabeth  was the oldest then it was Taunese and Ashley was the youngest. In the weekends Ashley, Taunese and Elizabeth and sometimes Elizabeth’s parents would go to the swimming pools.

One day it was raining, instead of walking Elizabeth’s parents would take them to the swimming pools, but then Elizabeth and Taunese had to start a fight then we had to walk. Ashley was getting so wet that she rang a taxi to the swimming pools.

After she went in a cab Elizabeth and Taunese did not know she was gone, then they got worried they stopped fighting to look for Ashley,  In the mean time Ashley is swimming around in the beautiful water until, Elizabeth and Taunese walked through the door Saying “Ashley where are you” in a quiet voice. When Elizabeth saw me I jumped out of the swimming pool and started running.

When we got home Ashley said “sorry for taking a cab to the pools” for next time I won’t. Elizabeth and Taunese said “Sorry” to each other and then were best friends again.
TO BE CONTINUED......

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