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Monday, 15 April 2013

Eel of Omaru Creek

Once  upon a time there was an Eel called lucy. She had eight friends who loved racing up and down the river. She also had thousands of cousins and uncles and aunties. Every day one would always die and they wanted to move but they didn't like salt water. Whenever they had to search for their food (fish grubs) they had to swim and try to find food.

Omaru creek flourished and it was crystal clear. You could see the plants at the bottom of the river until lucy saw people throwing rubbish into the river. People use to swim in the  crystal clear river. But the river became polluted from all the people that threw rubbish in the Omaru creek. The creatures in the river had died because people has been throwing rubbish in the river the plants were dying and the water was green.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Ashley,
    I liked how you are trying to use lots of interesting vocabulary. How was the problem resolved?

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