Yesterday morning my literacy class started a narrative writing about a photo, the photo had a tent in it and a forest. This piece of writing is mine. I have created this narrative about two students going camp. It has different T.O.P.S in it if you don't know what tops stands for, it stand for Title, Orientation, Problem and Solution.
As the bell rang “Ring ring ring,” all of the students ran out of their classes yelling “School’s over yay!” Levi decided to go camping but he didn’t wanna go alone so he invited his friend John. Levi asked John “do you wanna come camping with me.” John replied “Sure.”
When they were all packed and ready to go John’s mum Alison, decided to drop them off. They were finally at the camp, they were shaking. When they were all set up and ready to go they went exploring throughout the camp. They heard birds chirping, in the trees, people yelling and most of all they heard dogs barking. When they finished exploring, the sun was going down. As the moon came up the dark swallowed the light.
The next night they heard noises in the bushes, so they went to go check it out. When they got to the bushes the noises were gone, but when they walked back to their tents they heard the noises again. They started running they were tired, someone was following them back to their tents. The boys were frightened they heard the zipper of the tent open. “Please don’t take us,” the boys replied.
“I’m not gonna take you!” Alison said.
“Mum what are you doing here!” John replied.
“Well I thought you needed some things,” Alison replied.
“Ok,” they both replied.
The next day it was time to get up for fitness. But the boys were still sleeping while they were doing fitness, they slept right through fitness time. They woke up just in time for breakfast and everybody just stared at them because they were still in their Pajamas, then everybody started laughing!”
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