Missing the bus

Here is my paragraph that I had written. It is all about Missing the Bus.

This story is about Missing the bus. It is all about a girl name Teina she had to go to the library to get her books just as they were running around the corner mum had missed the bus so they had chased the bus to school Mako and Dean was laughing at them. Finally they were at school, Teina’s mum said “we should walk to school every day” "but what if it rains" we could take the bus to school. 

The moral about this story is exercise .