What is good for you in the sun?
We have to keep safe, Wear sun block, Don’t get cancer, Wear sunglasses and a hat?
It is good to stay safe in the sun so you don’t get cancer and you will not get burnt. You will need to have a hat on so it could protect your face and your neck, the hat can’t cover your whole body because it is too small.
We need to keep safe by wearing your own hat and you don’t take it off. You will need to have a hat on so it could protect your face and your neck, the hat can’t cover your whole body because it is too small.
Staying safe is when you don’t get sick and you don’t need to go to the hospital. If you do get sick you will need to go to the hospital and they will give you some medicine to get rid of the sickness.
So there you go we you have learnt somethings to do in the sun. Remember you have to wear glasses, sunblock and a hat.
Ashley
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful piece of writing that you have written, with some really wonderful tips and ideas. I really like the hat that you included in your post. It looks like something that Mr Burt would wear during assembly.
You wrote some fantastic reasons about why you should have a hat during the sun. Why is it that you think that schools don't always allow students to also wear sunglasses. I think that a nice sunny day makes everyone feel happy as well. Sunblock is really important, summer can be a time when people can get sunburnt really easily.
I enjoyed reading your writing and I liked how you put it into paragraphs.
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Hi Ashley,
ReplyDeleteIt is Rosalina your friend. I liked how you showed me what to wear and why we need to wear it in the sun. What cool ideas and tips you had in your writing keep this up. I hope create more ideas.
These are some cool tips why we need to wear these in the sun and to keep safe in the sun, love your writing and hope you write more explanations like this sometime.