Friday 28 June 2013
Octopus
In a family of 7 kids and 1 mom had not enough money for food but luckily for 1 of the kid was going to dress up party she was upset because she did not have a good dress and she really wanted to eat the food when she got to the party she was a octopus she sung the tentacols and asked the boys then it was supper time she really wanted to eat the food but her arms were stuck and she could not take her costume of because she was only wearing her underwear underneath.
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Good effort on retelling Ashley. You've got one big long paragraph and only one fullstop. Remember to get a buddy to check your writing before posting it to your blog.
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